im not a good spellar ether, so i can relate, but over all i couldnt stop readind and im like really picky on the books i read, so this was really good! i mean i usally hate most vampire love story, but this was really, well delisouse!
but just chage the ending to make it more rich with words! :P
im not a good spellar ether, so i can relate, but over all i couldnt stop readind and im like really picky on the books i read, so this was really good! i mean i usally hate most vampire love story, but this was really, well delisouse!
but just chage the ending to make it more rich with words! :P
im not a good spellar ether, so i can relate, but over all i couldnt stop readind and im like really picky on the books i read, so this was really good! i mean i usally hate most vampire love story, but this was really, well delisouse!
but just chage the ending to make it more rich with words! :P
i guess you didn't get anyone to read over this and check for errors huh? some of the phrases and spelling is wrong, and there are words that dont belong where they are:)i will happily edit books for free:) just because i enjoy a good read :) bonziedavis@yahoo.com
When you said a love story that wasn't like what i was used to |i found it highly unlikely. After all all the essential elements were there; dame, dude, jealous brother and authoritarian father.
All in all Good one. Although towards the end of the reading I noticed that you seemed to let go of tenses and grammar; the fluid thought construction displayed in previous pages just sort of melts into the dark.
wow, that was definitely different, but it was a great book.
Hey, it's a really good book. You should write more or start another story line and make a series. You could go places! Hey, can you read my (unfinished) book and tell me what I could improve on? It's called Katie's Summer. Thanks!