I have a wife who is really afraid of spiders too, I liked it.

I absoultely hate spiders, would've done the same thing lol. Great book and good imaginary descriptions!

i liked your imagination...most of us have so gotten used to the concept of creepy crawlies that we wouldnt have come up with the notion of it the way you have..takes imagination to give new twists to old china..well done.your little errors of english have i'm sure been told to you already ...cheers!

u were rite...lol
I did like it alot
Reeli luv ur exagerations

Hi, I really enjoyed it. You have really good descriptions and I reckon you did a really good job of creating suspense at the beginning.
There is a few mistakes. In the sentence, "Then, the scissors-like things infront of its mouth...", it should be "Then, the scissor-like things in front of its mouth..."
Also, there is a typo. You have "the monster sarted running" instead of "the monster started running."
The very last thing is on the last page where you have "Do you always have to do such a big...", you should have "Do you always have to make such a big..."
All together, I really enjoyed it. Good job!

I was expecting it to be a millipede, but still very funny.

that was cool

It was very nice, i can't wait to read more of your work!

You have a good imagination for writing. Very good!

I love it, nicely done. The biggest monster many of us face still deserves some credit.