want more!!!!! is there more to this coooooooool story? or is this it?

nice idea. very nice. i have a feeling, though, that you should make it appeal more to others by using stronger words and editing some. make sure that you don't use a word too much, or the reader will get bored with it. but stick to creative ideas and let your imagination flow about the pages ;)

what i have read of this book was intoresting to me a little girl would really enjoy this book

fantastic alot of drama and i did not want it to end it was that good

Uhh. I think you wanna finish