nice start and good plot. hope you update soon and get to finish!

plzzzzz update >.

Please let me know when there is more

please let me know when there is more :)

Great start, good structure and it will be interesting to see the plot:)

love it keep riting dont give up!1

Write soon PLEASE!!!!!!!!

its good its perfect !

plz keep writing

Write more! It's so good.