Interesting story! I really can't wait to see how it ends!

I've added more to chapter 26 and added 3 more chapters. It's starting to speed up a little....please give me some feedback?

I've added more to chapter 26 and added 3 more chapters. It's starting to speed up a little....please give me some feedback?

This is a great story, I can't wait to see what else you can come up with. You should enter some of the contests as well.

Thanks for the feed back and help. Hopefully, the story is good enough to keep you entertained.

I started reading your book this morning and it sounds very interesting. I am more interested in story line than grammar, even though I know its important. Someone here guided me to a web site that somewhat checks your grammar.
http://www.grammarcheck.net/

I intend to finish your book later today. Good read so far!

i know that there are a handful of small grammatical mistakes that need to be fixed. I'm working on those as well as the rest of the book. Thank you for your patience. I hope you enjoy it.

I'm still working on this...enjoy it.