now I will await more...P

I'm not sure if it'll be done in time for the FF contest.

I'll make sure to let you when
I've worked on it again.

A good start!

FYI - for the FF contest you need at least 25 pages to enter so get another 15 pages on here STAT! hehe

Let me know when it's updated. :)

You just cannot stop there....Great openning to what I hope will be a great story. What will it take for you to complete it?
Laz

Well written and captures my interest. Yes, I want to read more....so please carry on and finish this.

You mean writing?

keep righting