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ilyjamie

wow! this was great(:

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lakshmipriya

wow....................eventhough moves smooth and makes us feel normal,the final touch exactly reveals a real character of a woman who was longing to join her lover in future ............amazing...feels worthful

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lakshmipriya

wow.............eventhough moves so smooth and make us feel like normal .the final touch exactly reflects a real character of a woman who really waiting for a life with her lover.............amazing

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bettyc

Leaving home for the big city and all its opportunities is something that I can relate to.

All the best

Betty c

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salem123

good short story It is very excited

Thank you

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tammarask

i loved this story and wish it was a longer novel!

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tammarask

i loved this story and wish it was a longer novel!

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maryhcollins

Thank you so much for your kind words about my short story, I may write a novel around it someday. I have eight full lenth novels published, you can check them out at https://www.heartsonfirebooks.com (under romance) or you can get them at amazon.com (print or ebook)

maryhcollins

Thank you so much for your kind words about my short story, I may write a novel around it someday. I have eight full lenth novels published, you can check them out at https://www.heartsonfirebooks.com (under romance) or you can get them at amazon.com (print or ebook) :D

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maryhcollins

this is one of the best stories I've written

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kimber

I loved the story. You are a great writer,

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caycay

I loved this story! I wish it was a full length novel.

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