Intelligent and insightful. A love triangle between you, the lover and the myth, who brought fire to the earth but also to your love. There are many good lines. I especially like the one, “It was an escape from reality surrounding us in the reality of living self.”
In short, I couldn’t stop reading it until I had read it 3 times. OUTSTANDING!!
Mari, you got my vote. Beautifully written. So much emotion.
A woman who has not felt passion in her life could not have wriiten these lovely words and thoughts.
I felt that this story had 2 parts...pages 5 to 15, and then the rest.
I fell in love with the first part.
Laz
this is a great book loved it cant wait to read more of your work
Beautifully done....a lovely collection...
"And I can see you
It's only me who can see you
You're the color without any name
You're my eternity"
Very touching. This can't even be used on a girlfriend. This has to be saved for the intimate sanctity of the first night of marriage.