Nice poetry about love and struggles of life.Voted.
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Nice poetry about love and struggles of life.Voted.
I love this poem and I thoroughly enjoyed reading your book...
i especially like The snowman and Words of Love.
a snowman is usually made by a child, and your poem seems to me to be about the beauty of creation - like a child's feeling that her doll is real.
Words of Love is haunting -- the whole metaphor of water and impermanence.
"... the sea sand, which feels like a silk slipped worn-out dress when i touch it." - a very nice turn of phrase.
- jb
Thank you for being honest with me. I appreciate your support very much..We need to change our feelings,to change our attitude and our way to being. We need God . Learning to recognize and stay with our feelings is a strong message in my book.
Counterfeit love, I loved that part in your poem about love words, keep up the good work, and thanks for sharing and commenting on my work as well! Have a good night!
Thank you for sharing your work with me. I'm willing to be your friend, but I do not understand some of your work. I can't vote for something if I'm not sure I understand what is being said. I'm very sorry. I did try to read some of the poems more than once. You seem to be doing very well, though.
It made tears come to my eyes. Wonderful is the poet who can inspire and create such emotion in thier reader. For this I give the book two thumbs up.
voted and saved - very touching...Paula
Your poems are deep and emotional. I love your poem "Absence of words." It is inspiring. I vote your book. All the best!