Awesome

should make it longer..great writing though..i wanted to stop reading it ( i hate stpid vampire books..darn twilight series sucked) but i couldn't. :] very good

It was short, but intriguing. You certainly had my attention. Keep it up.

i think it needs more sexual contents

wow that was sexy

It was alright while it lasted. Should be more, though.

very sexy book add more pages

Love the ending and how you put details in but it's not a run-on great write! :)

A good read.Over too quickly.

That was a Good story. I loved the way you put some much detail into it made it that much better. I write a lot of books. If you get the time read one and tell me what you thank.