This is a very interesting book! But, it also really needs some work & its seems very similiar to my good friends book, 'Like A Drug?' Ring any bells? Maybe you've read it...? Anyway, there needs some work on the punctuation and paragraph breaks in the descriptions of the characters and surroundings (because at the beginning it didn't really tell us that the main character had a twin, or that they both have special abilities...). Otherwise, it was nice!:)

Good job, and good luck.
-D.D.

Criticism:

This book has similar points to mine, but I might be over thinking. People write the same books so I shouldn't say much. You should work on your grammar, punctuation is okay and the characters personalities are a bit..much. But overall nice book. Your plot is heading somewhere good, I can tell. Nice to leave us at suspense at the end. Keep up the good work!

-Marie

addicted now... need more

OMG!!! you should totally continue this!!!

write more love it what happen

plz lemme no wen u update n become my friend n check out meh books

plz lemme no wen u update n become my friend n check out meh books

well write now im in the process of writing out the next chapter. once im done editing ill upload it. :)

pls pls let me know when the chapter comes out your really good all thumbs up

Dont worry it doesn't stop there thats just the ending of a chapter. i will posting this story up by chapters and any other book i may write, for that mater. im writing the other chapters now as we speak. :)