I BURST OUT IN TEARS WHEN I READ THIS ITS SOO GOOD AND THE ENDING IS SO UNEXPECTED PLZ MAKE A SECOND PART TO THIS STORY

the book was awesome & u should some more! I just didn't get the way jacob imprinted on renesmee and then imprinted on someone else so that mixed me up but it was awesome

the book was awesome & u should some more! I just didn't get the way jacob imprinted on renesmee and then imprinted on someone else so that mixed me up but it was awesome

This story was amazing. I loved it. It almost made me cry in the end.

i loved it but i dont like the fact that renesmee loves jack i hate him

the boook is good but it mixed me up

I was lie crying at the end of this book!! I really loved it but hated the ending because Jacob imprinted on renesmee but said he imprinted on someone else? but you should totally continue. I like how renesmee doesnt hold anything back(:

I don't think Stephenie Meyer would be very happy about me taking her ideas lol But thanks :)

I LOVED UR BOOK :D
YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER!!
its just that in breaking dawn jacob imprinted on nessie when she was born and at the end of the book he says that he imprinted on someone else, so im confused on that part so can you please clear it up for me?
other than that part everything matched up correctly! only if the book had been longer...seriously...take writing classes so one day the who world can have more access to your books :D

Thanks! & it's not done yet silly! lol I just havent been able to post. But i will be soon so look out for that!