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Really good! Awesome...I loved the time travel one.
You are talented! Keep going!
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Really good! Awesome...I loved the time travel one.
You are talented! Keep going!
There were a few things I couldn't make sense of. Despite that, the selection of stories had a creative edge to it
I really liked the book, your writing is splendid
Pretty cool book. It's different (in a good way) from any other short story I've read on here.
Yeah I have been inspired by music on multiple occasions to write, and normally listen to music when I write, though lately while working on my novel I haven't been listening to music.
Same here. I'm having writer's block at the moment. -_-
Yeah that sucks, though I have found that writers block is basically an illusion of the mind, you just have to break through the mental barrier. Doesn't make it any less a pain in the ***.
i have read the first two stories, great stuff!
Thank you for reading, I am glad you enjoyed the first two stories :).
the butterfly in the school reminded me of my youth....
Yeah, he is a strange sort of reflection of myself.
Your style is incredible. You have a genius for writing. :)
Thank you
They may be mindless ramblings but they are very well written and a joy to read. :o)
Good read, good discussion about whether or not killing can be moral. I liked your opening scene a lot. :)
Thank you I appreciate you taking the time to read :).
I thought it was a good book. Yet the only thing is that Mark was so nonchalant about killing. when Taylor asks how are you? Mark answered good, considering I just did my first kill..No compassion or remorse. liked it but was not sure why they were killing these people. It was well put together,just a little confusing.
Thank you I appreciate you taking the time to read :). And Mark was nonchalant via dialogue, but not with his mannerism.
This is a really good idea that could easily be fleshed out more. As it is now, it's rather spare in detail, reading somewhat like a script for a video game. I really need something to go on for why I should care about this character and his conflict. Give some more sensory description to help put the reader into the story.
Thank you I appreciate you taking the time to read :).
Thank You so much! means so much to me. I started writing at the age of 12 and have slacked off quite a bit for years. The ideas are coming back to me now, so tune in...