woooowwwwww this is really good keep it up

This story is mysterious in a way. I love that it makes me wonder who's in the suit. I think he fell in love with her, like she did with him. His courting efforts were charming. How could she resist his chivalrous efforts? Lol! Fantastic and original story idea!

its okay but it would be better longer

to vote...p

nice, cute and funny, i voted

Funny and romantic story. I voted.

Lucky,
A refreshing break from all that serious writing, you must have a great sense of humour to come up with something like that. Original idea presented in an interesting, absorbing story. You got my vote. If I see someone in a chicken suit in the mall, I'll always think of your story.

Jack

Agreed. This is very cute. My vote too.

Your story was very funny I had a good laugh and I liked it and voted for it. Serena

Olivia,
I like your creativity. You have my vote on this story.
Augustus.