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Omg best book ever
when are you going to complete this book?..PLZ UPDATE!!!!!
This story has a ton of potential. I believe one day you could get this published. There are a few things I would suggest: there were moments that I became confused, not really sure what was happening. I really did enjoy the story though and hope to read more!
Omg I loved this book the best i have read so far you should try and make more... PS the way you ended it was pretty well it leaves you guessing and will have you waiting at the edge of your seats for the next book/ chapter.... please keep going.
Okay first before I begin with my opinion of this opinion I mean not to criticize your writing skills.
Okay in the beginning it was a fairly good book. But then around the middle I felt like you kind of smash two different stories together. Like one half is Romance while the other is just a crazy Sci-Fi adventure.
I feel you should've made the ending half its own book and the beginning its own. Because after awhile your... mehr anzeigen
thanks for your feedback! I understand its pretty disjointed, I started it a very long time ago without a clear direction of where I was going with it. If I go back and edit it, there would be a lot of things I would change... but I still enjoyed the process and don't regret it.
Okay guys, I'm kind of in a bind here, Im not satisfied with the ending I have been working on and want your feedback! What do you think would be a great ending? Who knows, I might incorporate your favorite ideas into the grand finale!
And Mona using her ability ;)
If your going to keep adding to the book, I think there should be a death. Every great book you read there is always someone dying. I think It should be Ray, not that I don't like him, (Which I do, and so does everybody...) and that's the point, you made it so everybody loves... mehr anzeigen
Love the book, the ending seems difficult because Ray is not really Xavier's brother so he is a traitor, however his remorse seems genuine, his intentions have merit in doing what he did and he has become part of the pack. It would be awesome if this book became a series,... mehr anzeigen
I need to know what happens grr!!!
Xavier stops mona frm throwin that crown as he knows that it is part of rays plan to harm mona. There would be a duel btw ray nd xaviers where xavier gets hurt nd then mona steps in and in revenge mode she destroys ray and finally fullfills the prophecy. And it turns out that... mehr anzeigen
Haha i like your idea Natalie! Wouldn't it be great if every story ended that way... ;)
This is first book I went through on BookRix, also is first one after long time.
I'm glad that I choose this one to read. It is pure pleasure to read and experience love, being loved, fantasy etc.
Looking forward to completion, just loving it ;)
READ ON OR DIE TONIGHT AT 10:35 P.M 9 years ago a person named Jerry got dared to sleep in a house that was believed haunted. The next day his friends waited for him outside the house...... They had to go inside and search for him. They went through every room exept the attic.... mehr anzeigen
Thank you for reading! next chapter coming soon
I am dying waiting! When does the final chapter come out? :)
READ ON OR DIE TONIGHT AT 10:35 P.M 9 years ago a person named Jerry got dared to sleep in a house that was believed haunted. The next day his friends waited for him outside the house...... They had to go inside and search for him. They went through every room exept the attic.... mehr anzeigen
thank you! next chapter coming soon:)