Nkoloko
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Nkoloko

loved it

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Rajdev
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Rajdev

Good story, I like the book, and there is another best book to read is The Perfect Author, you can read it on http://theperfectauthor.in Really mind blowing, worth to read.

The Perfect Author - Story About An Excellent Story By Best Author http://theperfectauthor.in The Perfect Author is a Mythical Fiction, Web Story.It is an Artistically creative Novel about the Best Story about the Best Book written by the Best Author.
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Itc
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Itc

I don't understand on certain pages your English is backwards and also you have repeated wording such as I am man, I am a man... I am a woman, I am a woman.... Asian, Asian, Asian
.. Also I love to have fun, but not with you. I am confused at how this was not proof read properly cause the context of this sorry tends to be all over the place.

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Itc
Itc

Oh and also, you tend to wonder off in the story as if your unsure of your characters and story line. It's as if you wanted to change the story line many times but it just ended up everywhere.

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Perfect... I love musical stories... Greay

Somebody That I Used To Know
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Somebody That I Used To Know

http://www.bookrix.com/_ebook-cassia-beckett-confessional/
I would be honoured for any and all feedback and or opinions on my new book "Confessional"

Please and Thank you,
Cassia

Confessional . (1# The Shadow Trilogy) https://www.bookrix.com/_ebook-cassia-beckett-confessional/ Laurel Carter has lost everything. Stuck in an insane asylum that is beginning to destroy her. She is losing hope and discovering loneliness. That is, until she meets Ashley Larkin. His enchant...
Preshitha
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Preshitha

Best and beautiful love book..

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this is one of the best books I've read in a while

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Joyful
Joyful

I enjoyed your book ...I loved the characters and all the places,that it took me to every time I read it. Thank you for sharing.

Fiction-freak
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Fiction-freak

The book is good, and I like your choice of names. That's all.

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You are an amazing writer but the book is too boring. I did not finish reading it but i will sit through it hoping something more exciting might happen

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Butterfly
Butterfly

ok it was a good book but the way you describe everything in so much details make it unexciting :(

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I just started the reading, I can see that you are good. Thaaanks, it was the first book I read here since I got back. I will give you a further critique when I'm done, that, if you want to. I will finish it in 3hrs maybe, so I can give it right away taking advantage on my sleep over with a smooth wifi connect'n that I didn't enjoy often these days. So, uh, I'll go back to my reading then. :)

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