You did an awesome job. A Howl In The Night sucked me in. The many many adjectives worked well giding my inner view throu the story. I was suprised, thought in general it would be called a writers crime to do so.
I had the impression, your were taken away by the story sometimes, creating some missleading branches. The story plot could be worked on.
Speaking of the substance more than the pure content, dissocial concepts and... mehr anzeigen
You did an awesome job. A Howl In The Night sucked me in. The many many adjectives worked well giding my inner view throu the story. I was suprised, thought in general it would be called a writers crime to do so.
I had the impression, your were taken away by the story sometimes, creating some missleading branches. The story plot could be worked on.
Speaking of the substance more than the pure content, dissocial concepts and beliefs are placed in the main charakter. It ain't easy to put such qualitys into light. Her fight to overcome those handicaps took me in.
If you need to call Griffins brother bepolar or if it would work out nicer not doing so? I'm not so much used to common american speach to dicide wether bipolar is meant to be a diagnosis or just something like being quick-tempered, as I am German and my last flirt with a GI is way down the road.
Greets, Marion
Hey, thanks! I love this so much! I hope you are satisfied with the ending, I love yours as well!
thankyou so much!.... I haven't read it yet but m sure its the best.. love this book :)