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tmyers

Well geez made me sad. To hear about my mother. A woman I have always loved and never got the chance to know. I am so happy to finally have a piece of that through Bobbie and you. I love you both very much and cant wait to finally meet in person. I LOVE YOU my dearest Aunty

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lovingempath

I think it's a good idea to leave a little verbal feedback (even in a personal email) when someone takes the time to read your story and then submit low scores like that. Even a one or two line comment saying something like "your story sux...it needs more whatever...less whatever." :) I can second-guess myself all day long, trying to figure out what is meant to be spiteful, or whether it's someone's honest opinion. I'm... mehr anzeigen

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donnamyoung

I dropped by to see how the contest was going and where everyone is ranked. I was amazed to see that you had lost a little ground. Your work is wonderful. I wondered if it had anything to do with those who rated you unfairly on the scale at the left. I looked at the ratings boxes and noticed a couple of people who had given you very low ratings in categories where your work was absolutely immaculate! My only thought is that... mehr anzeigen

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lovingempath

...for all of your support. Much appreciated!!

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lovingempath

Thank you rinkydink!

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rinkydink

Wow.

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lovingempath

I appreciate your encouraging words, as well as the vote.

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lovingempath

You always have great insight into the human condition.
Thank you for stopping by and showing your support. I will also take a look at the elements of my story that rated low on the gizmo to the left. I think honest critiquing is very helpful, but at this point I think I may have exhausted my own abilities to find the places that need help. I've edited my story to death...:)

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lovingempath

Thank you for stopping by Ben.

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olfaphilo

A well-penned story. The rivalry and jealousy between sisters is well depicted and beautifully voiced. Thnx for sharing Robin. voted.

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