A evolutional story of great meaning. Somewhere everyone has a sister or a brother or a friend that had it all. Being jealous or fearful of that person doesn't lessen them; they are stars in their own right and in their own place. We cannot change what happens in life after it happens. We must keep on.
Wow, great story Robin. I thought it was emotional, but to the right level. Very nicely written as well with the jealousy being conveyed perfectly.
Wow, great story Robin. I thought it was emotional, but to the right level. Very nicely written as well with the jealousy being conveyed perfectly.
I very much appreciate your comments, and I also appreciate your willingness to go through and help to read books for this contest.
Let us know when your next book is out. Can't wait..:)
Thanks again!
I found this piece wonderfully written. It brings to the attention the realities of life. The mixed feelings sisters may undergo and do experience. There were some small grammatical errors, but they didn’t deter me from reading on. I enjoyed this very much. Keep writing. Good luck and best wishes.
CAV LASTER
"Wow, Man..." :) I'm sure you didn't intend for that comment to show up so many times, but I like reading it repeatedly anyway. Many thanks!
All I can say is "Wow,Man". What an incredible story. You were descriptive and made me feel like I was right there with you . Great story!
All I can say is "Wow,Man". What an incredible story. You were descriptive and made me feel like I was right there with you . Great story!
All I can say is "Wow,Man". What an incredible story. You were descriptive and made me feel like I was right there with you . Great story!