please i hope u can upload more of this story it was awesome and i loved the length it was perfect the wording needs work but it didnt matter the story was really nice so please continue with ur work

i really liked reading this story and i have it as one of my favs. but when are you going to upate? all this waitin is makin me crazy!!!!

I like it very much :)

I like it very much :)

great story. i could hardly take my eyes from the pages. keep up the amazin work!!!

k.when updating plz tell me.and sorry 2 hear that but i had a baby that was still life a month ago so i fell yo pain

i really liked this book..please continue to write...please finish this book!!!!!

Might be good if the typos were corrected and the format was modified to be able to know who is saying what.
Spell check would help.
It might have potential , but it's too hard to read in this layout...

Honestly nobody gives a flying fuck if you don't like it if you don't like then don't read.

plz finish this book cuz its a must read!