hey this awsome so far its really and i cant stop reading lol

it was a great story i really enjoyed it. keep yhe good work up.

I'm sorry, but this book seriously needs a grammar check. It's a good book, but fix the grammar.

thankyou. im trying to think what could happen next :L.

to be honest i dont realy mind what other people think it was just a hobby i like to write alot.im not going to make a real book out of it but the thanks anyway /:)

Lets start out with the positives: it sounded like a good idea. A cute cover.

There was a distinct lack of capitalization, grammar, and spelling - which was horrendous torture to the eyes. Sorry, but in desperate need of editing.

I loved that book you rock you should make your own book for the world to see in a hardcover. Amazing. I had to read it more than five times evrytime I got on this I read your Book. Just amazing keep it up!

This book was AWESOME!!!!

You sould write more because you can't just leave us on a cliff hanger like that one!

hey r u goin 2 write more cuz i love it write more plz