oi! you people need to leave her alone!! hello does "I'm from the UK" mean anything! morons we have a difrent way of spelling...duh!

PLEASE EXTEND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!XD

I do like the way this story is going but i have to agree with others that you do need to check grammar and punctuation. This make a big diffrence when you are trying to gain the readers intrest. I'm not saying this to be mean or anything but that is something to be worked on. Another thing is you need to include more detail. Why would these guys act the way they act in the begining of the story. Has the main character seen it before? That way readers don't get lost and say 'wait how did she know that?' or 'when did that happen?' but other than that it has a good structure. Oh and one more thing, check how you're typing your story because it looks all shifted to the left and it looks wierd. My respects though, and nice cover. Keep going I'm intrigued.

You just want to write a book to have fun and to relax you should try to write your own book and stop reading others if you have so many bad things to say about it. I love this book and the grammer and punuaction us great.

omg i thoubht this book was the best i hope u extend it and please do it quick because this book was the best

Learn how to spell?

omg you gotta write mire this is so good

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA FOOLS!! this girl needs to either learn how to spell, or get spell check. i couldn't get through the first page without puking in my mouth. Fix it. Young authors such as yourself and I need to learn to take insults and ridicule. so fix it. XP.

that was a great book

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