This was an intense read especially knowing it's true. I want to tell you how proud I am of you. You lived through hell and you fought to survive and be a better person, and that alone I can say is commendable. Remember when it comes to writing, no first draft of is ever pretty. LOL. You had a few missed spelled words and there's need of commas in some places. But I can safely say you are off to a great start. Keep writing... mehr anzeigen
This was an intense read especially knowing it's true. I want to tell you how proud I am of you. You lived through hell and you fought to survive and be a better person, and that alone I can say is commendable. Remember when it comes to writing, no first draft of is ever pretty. LOL. You had a few missed spelled words and there's need of commas in some places. But I can safely say you are off to a great start. Keep writing and thanks for sharing a piece of you. =-) Huggles.