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hunterlynne

don't leave me hangin like that......I'm in suspense....plz notify me if you update

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Lili

I'll update as soon as i get my laptop back sorry for the wait

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Alexi

Please don't let it end like this... I'm in suspense!
Please notify me if you ever update.

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Gelöschter User

This is awesome!!! Please update!

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Gelöschter User

Or is this the end?

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Lili

did you like my update?

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Adam Lewis LaValley

Some grammar and structural errors - but like anything else, those can be fixed. ;)

Wow, great action to begin with! There is some definite turmoil going on, and I myself cannot believe the father would use a shotgun against her!

Definitely continue writing this...!

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Lili

I wilk try to continue the story

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Lili

Should I continue this book?

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gresensmj25

Please write more i would like to know where ur going with this

Lili

okay i will try