Wichtiger Beitrag
Its really good!!! You need to update soon!! :)
Its really good!!! You need to update soon!! :)
Aw, thanks so much!!! I was busy today but I'll just message you when I do. <3
cool thanks :)
It's good. Has a nice story-line.
It could use some editing, and it's paced very, very quickly. Too quick. Maybe you should go over it again and slow it down, describe things, give the readers a good image in their head, ya'know? :D
Also, sometimes when people are talking, I get confused as to who is talking because you don't say who it is. :\
Other than that, it's good! Keep writing! owo
Thanks for the tips! I was hoping someone would give me some. Lol thanks, I'll go over it soon. <3
wow really nice when you update next chap.
Aw, thanks so much. <3
your welcome,if you update tell me ok
I just updated the last chapter. ;)
ok,D
please update
I will tomorrow. Thanks for adding my book! Whoot whoot! You must be freaking awesome. Lolz
i think???
Lol don't doubt it. ;)
What an exciting book. ♥
Asher sounds Hot♥ and I'm inlove with his teasing self. And I love his name lol.
Exactly, guys are confusing but so are we. Lol
Oops, I thought you were the one who didn't respond to the last comment. You know when you're waiting for a reply but you're the one who forgot to? My bad! Lol and yes we are too confusing. But guys are so complicated to figure out.
Lol, I know right. >.<
I updated the book some and I still am. Tell meh if it needs anything. Thanks. ;)
Hey I'm not sure if you ment it that way, but in the blurb conceded is the past tense of concede (like to give in). If you ment it that way I'm sorry for sounding a perfectionist or anything, but did you mean conceited (proud and full of yourself)?
Oh nah you're good. Thanks yeah I meant conceited. Stupid auto-correct! Lol thanks again. ;)
No problem :)
yes it is
Thanks my peepssssss! Yall are so frickin awesome too!
I KNOW LOL!!! And you are completely welcome <3 :)