Well for one thing you have to give a piece of the meat to get the reader interested. You get saying mistakes and stuff that happened in the past. It isn't interesting at first glance. You need to captivate the reader immediately or else you have lost 75% of possible readers. Once you read the whole thing, it does get interesting though. Another thing to think about is "Short and Sweet". It is a code you must go by to become greater than yourself. If you make a preview, shorten it, then shorten it again until it is bare bones. Make the interested reader look at it and think they know something without actually giving the whole thing away. My opinion. Okay. Bye-bye.

What a great book! Please finish it up! ^.^

Wow this looks like a great book. I would love to read it.

Funny that you mention the cover! I had a hard time finding one I liked so I just chose a picture my sis took when we did a theme to practice her photography.

Haha yes =D

Thanks

Amazing...need to find out where this is leading to. Guess I need to wait til January. You got my vote.
Laz

Looks like a very interesting read! :-)
The cover is quite striking and really catches the eye.
Definitely on the top of my "books to read" list.

This book looks great =)
When I have time I will read it!

Very appealing. When I find the time I'll definitely read! Can't wait!

P.s. Cavallo Nero ;)

Very appealing. When I find the time I'll definitely read! Can't wait!

P.s. Cavallo Nero ;)