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Ur book blew up it was like a bom ticking and made me explode inside cause it was good
""It was amazing in other words
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Ur book blew up it was like a bom ticking and made me explode inside cause it was good
""It was amazing in other words
Your story drew me in very quickly, and I felt the underlying fear beneath. Your descriptions are beautifully delivered and I was totally entranced by this story. I would love to see you develop it into a full-length novel. All the best.
thank you for that, for taking the time to read it and to tell me how you felt. It really means a lot to me, especially knowing I've taken someone somewhere with my writing. I'm hoping to return the favor to everyone who's read it and do some serious reading here myself.
LilyRose, Is that really your name?
You're both Lily and Rose. That is a rare flower indeed!! I was just going to skim your story as a favour to
gooduklady, an early admirer of my writing style. But, you have blown me out of the water. The sense of life in the ephemeral so beautifully describe and brought to life. I felt your words come together and form a magical place that transcends time. I better stop now or I could go on... mehr anzeigen
thank you for the comments. And I am going to do some reading here to return the favor (and pleasure) of having mine read.
LilyRose... let's put it this way, I took the name for myself, but it always felt "real" to me.... both because of its personal meaning and the fact that so... mehr anzeigen
I thank Val for bringing this tale to my attention. I just read up to page 9, and I'm blown away by all the fantastic description. I will finish reading it later, at my leisure...and I'm positive that it will merit a vote.
Bravo, LilyRose
Laz
You have my vote as well dear. I shall pass on the word for your book.
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Hey, thank you for that. I'm looking forward to doing some reading here to return the favor. It's nice to share stories
I agree with Bek. I wish I had read your story earlier, for I surely would have urged everyone to vote for you or make you a wildcard entry. You are a superb writer, eons above everyone else in this contest, in my humble opinion. I devoured your story in minutes and felt every second of it. Congratulations. I shall pass the word on to my friend to vote for you. Valerie
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Wow, I'm starting to feel a little overwhelmed. I don't tend to get noticed anywhere I go. Thank you so much for the really nice feedback. It means a lot to me.
Poetry in story form. You have a wondrous way of weaving words into such images. This is the best I have read yet. Thank you.
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thank you so much. The poetry of language really is something I strive for, it's nice to know it comes across well. :-) Thanks again, it's nice you took the time to comment xD
layout...the unraveling of a soul...whew
Awesome story and writing. Liked how you've narrated the whole, good flow and also very creative.
Thanks for the read. :)
thank you for telling me that you liked it. I mean, I really appreciate that you took the time to do that. And I will take a look at your stuff. I'm kinda new on this site, still don;t know my way around that much :-/
It's getting close to end so I haven't kept up with the entries. Thanks for sending a message out on this one. Good story, it creeped me out!
hi, I just wanted to say that I'm glad you liked it, and thank you for taking the time to say so. :-)
Hey, thank you. I mean, thanks for liking it, of course, ;-) but also for taking the time to let me know, because it does mean a lot. later....