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So I like the story, it has definite potential, but it definitely needs some editing. The grammatical and punctuation errors definitely throw the entire thing off. Also, the base of the story is a little "wobbly", for the lack of a better word. I really like the plot of the story and really want to read it, your blurb has intrigued me and all, but these errors make it extremely difficult for me to get through. I do not mean... mehr anzeigen
Thanks for who ever read this. yea i know its missing a lot of events and sometimes you can be like "what?" but i thought i might as well but something out there. leave your comments and advice below thanks! <3
No worries and thanks. ive started adding more detail to it and of course editing which yes..it really needs it lol.
Haha, well I'm glad for that because I truly would like to finish reading it. If you need any grammatical or punctual help as to editing feel free to ask and I would be more than willing to lend a hand. ^_^
I'm glad and thanks ill keep that in mind :)
Sure thing. :)