I have read this book and enjoyed it. There were some moments when I got confused. the action scenes were good and your ideas were top notch. I vote a star for you./joeparente

A well-written exciting story. I enjoyed the read. Voted.

Exciting story; I liked the layout too.

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A strange tale indeed! It gave me the impression of going through a mirror into an alien dimension - hence my title. Christina is led by aline creatures into an alien world where her life is threatened. Fortunately she is an excellent fencer and by skillful use of a sword she is able to overcome the aliens and return to her own dimension. She showed great bravery, skill and courage. Was it a dream or a close encounter of the third kind? There is evidence for the latter. When she "woke up again" the evil presence, which had pervaded the house, has dissapeared. I would argue that she had to overcome the "presence" for it to dissapear. An intruing tale - well written - a good read. Well done Lesha I would commend this excellent short story. JOHN

Good book. Had some spelling errors and some descriptions for certain things would make it better. Overall though, great book. Btw, the idea about the souls that cavlaster pointed out, you could make the gems that are in their armor and shields what helped them to move.

I really like your story, but my eyes were aching after a while because of the black backround

For some reason I was only able to read up to the point where she was looking for new adversaries. Pretty funny up to that point though. Tough woman able to look for new adversaries with broken ribs.

I really enjoyed this,well written and kept my interest from beginning to end. Thank you.
~Tracie