What I meant but probably didn't convey very well, was that no one was controling these skeletons. They had spirits like you and me, but their bodies were just skeletal, and had no flesh and bone.
Please feel free to point out any mistakes and give me improvement tips.
Thank you and everyone else for reading my book and for your kind comments.

Lydia you have a creative imagination. You did well putting this tale together. It flowed well. You gave enough description details both of setting and physical descriptions to place me in the scene. And I love medieval times, so a girl with a sword taking down her enemies wins me over. I voted for your book because I see your great effort to whip up a tale. There are a few things that are needed. Proofreading of your grammar and tightening your writing would come in handy. There was only one issue I had most, but it did not affect my decision to give you a vote. When writing fantasy/fiction we learn that anything goes, BUT we must remember that anything we write about should have a logical explanation. You have a scene when Christina hears the skeletons talking both mentally or by mouth. Okay, the problem is skeletons don’t have vocal cords or a brain, so this goes way off. And second, skeletons that move and fight could only do so because in the fiction world SOMEONE ELSE controls them. So in order to make something sound possible when it’s impossible, you NEED to add something in the tale. For instance, you could have mentioned that Christina saw a glowing medallion around each of their necks, containing a soul that controls the skeleton. I’ve learned to catch these bloopers along the years working with fellow writers, both published and struggling ones. But this blooper could be fixed easily by what I’ve suggested, and that’s why I gave you a vote. Keep up the good work. ;-)

Very nice story and story line. There were a few errors, but otherwise a good story.

~David

Terrific story. Very compelling. It held my interest from beginning to end. I voted for you. Thank you.

Good Idea! Here´s a star.

Continue writing such stories.
They´ll become really exciting!

Loupil

Thanks for the intriguing story!

This looks like the first book in a series about the adventures of Christina. It is as if she has a sixth sense for the danger that is lurking in her home. It would be nice to get to know more about her and why these evil creatures target her...and to see her come out as the victor in this battle.

Great job!

God Bless,

Tyrone

Thank you vary much !

it was a really great story!! have nothing to complain about.I enjoy it

Thanks for reading my book. And to clear things up, yes, the whole house was dark. Christina didn't necessarily see the white on the chair, it's just that it's her house, so she knows.
Thanks again.