This is quite cute. A perfect children's story. A familiar story (loved the FNN part) for me, but for a child... well, it would be so exciting!
However,There are several instances where the sentences are awkward and seemingly incomplete. I'd encourage you to read through it out loud to catch any awkward sentences or words. Otherwise, this is good!

I think my little cousin would love this story :)

---RbG

Thank you, James, for the kind comment and heart!

proof that the Tooth Fairy exists. Greg is correct, Disney characters one and all, from the rather aloof Fairy, to the Laurel-and-Hardyesque assistants. Nice story!!

Thank you, Linn!

Thank you! I really enjoyed reading your books and I'm sure children of all ages will/are too..:) Keep up the great writing!

TY for the nice comment Tatyana!

Adorable! I could easily picture those mischievous creatures arguing all the time. Lovely story.

I LOVED this little short story about the apprentice fairies. I am a grandmother and read a lot to my grandchildren and THIS little story came to life for me. DARLING!

Loved the stories. I wish I had a tooth to lose so I could peek at these fairies!

Sweet, funny, entertaining... any child would love this!! The child in me sure does! Bravo!!!