Thank you for the hearts, guys!

Ultra cute....ha ha ha!

Thanks for the kind comment and the suggestion!

I love the humour, the story, the development, the dialogue ... well, I guess that covers pretty much everything!

One suggestion... perhaps check the spacing in the dialogue of lines 2 to 4.

I love the humour, the story, the development, the dialogue ... well, I guess that covers pretty much everything!

One suggestion... perhaps check the spacing in the dialogue of lines 2 to 4.

Thank you for the kind review and for the heart!

This sounds like the rag-tag team that visits my house. Delightful story that is sure to make the kiddies laugh.

Thank you for the kind review, Michael. The fact that you would take the time to read it to your grandchild means the world to me!

I'll be reading this to my 4 yo granddaughter on her next visit. If only to reassure her that the Tooth Fairy ALWAYS comes prepared!

Super job.

Thank you for your sweet comment! I'll have to check out your niece's book.