Hi Rebekah,

Thanks for pointing out the past and present tense in the book. I realized that I did not have the correct page count for the contest...I may or may not lenghten it. (haven't decided)

Thanks Linda

Hi Paige,
You will be amazed how grudging this behavior has become for some of the young children and teenagers, who are afraid to leave their homes or play outside in fear of gun violence and gang war. Although my story was fictional, gang retaliation is a reality in many American neighborhoods and schools. Thanks so much for your comments and your vote.

Linda

Hi Poohda.

Thank you for reading and voting for the Deadly Drive-by...

Linda B

Hi, Joe

I appreciate you taking the time to read the story. It has always been on my heart to writ about this. You are correct the morality of famity values has relasped. I hope and pray that the message is apparent...Thanks again

Linda B

Another Great Book. Very heartfelt

I found your book full of insight and intense information concerning the status and unending plight of our youth.
Great story.

Finally someone has written about this horrible gang thing that has hit America. I applaud you for that. There are some of those that don't care about human life. These thrill kills make me upset. It is the deterioration of the family that is the reason for much of this. Thank you for bringing this to light./joeparente

This is a good story and it has my vote. I hope that people will read this and as a result, have their eyes opened enough to actually do something about it. Truly unacceptable.

P.S, Thank you for reading and voting for my book Family Meeting.
If you like, please check out my other book 'Strangers In The Fire Place'.

Thank you for participating in our
fiction writing contest "My Best Fiction".

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