I see this from the other eyes, and I wonder if that is something my wife would describe. Very touching Laz.

I enjoyed it, but because I appreciate it when I receive in depth feedback here are "problems" I noticed:

First Page

1. In the first paragraph you say: I stand up and fall into you ebony eyes... (The 'you' should be 'your'.)
2. "A curtain of flesh cleaves our universes into two very different spaces." I think this would sound better if you removed the two, so it'd be "A curtain of flesh cleaves our universes into very different spaces."
3. Then at the very end of your powerful first paragraph you detract a lot from the last sentence with an unnecessary hmmm
This sounds better in my opinion: 'Perhaps in different dimensions; in different 'realities' ... I'm not so certain anymore.'
4. In the third paragraph you say: 'Perhaps you are remembering (the should be inserted here) days when we kissed out near the bearded barley, when we swore never to part ... never to let go.' ( Also this is the second time you have used perhaps to start a sentence in not too many words, so you may want to consider rewording it.
5. The sentence before the one I mentioned in 4 'Stores we use to frequent together.' (Use should be used. Almost missed it, lol.)

Second Page

1. 'That was many months ago ... more like an eternity.' Would sound better as 'That was many months ago ... what feels like an eternity.'
2. This long sentence I found to be particularly clunky towards the end 'Images of our life flash before me, but I really can't remember much of my own past life ... especially who I am or anything previous to meeting you.' I suggest rewriting it something like this: 'Images of our life flash before me, but I can't remember much about myself, or who I was and what I did before meeting you.'
3. The last sentence of this page should be rewritten something like this: 'No one on the whole damn bus hears my cries and if they do ... they don't care.'

Third Page

I don't really have anything to say for the song because I am not a songwriter....

In Conclusion
I really enjoyed the short short story despite the mistakes and while I pointed out many things, I do suggest fixing some of the spacing throughout it. Also, I would really like to see the story expanded, I think it has great potential. Finally, I hope I didn't offend you in any way with my criticism, something this emotional I'm sure is connected to you in some way.