Wichtiger Beitrag
What an entertaining tale! A cute, short, and simple story that'd keep all ages enthralled ;)
---RbG
- Permalink
- Kommentieren
- Kommentare sind geschlossen
What an entertaining tale! A cute, short, and simple story that'd keep all ages enthralled ;)
---RbG
When halitosis is your friend! That was really good. A nifty fun little read. I could see it being the start of a nifty semi-comedic series. :o)
Hahaha..."Sam the Vampire slayer". Thanks
So I wasn't the only one who was compelled to poke fun at the vampire "genre". Nicely done, Laz. I took your word that it wasn't one of your run-of-the-mill vampire stories. Very descriptive and you set the scene nicely. I could picture the two of them at the table jawing....
Thanks...just made a little change to the end...last paragraph.
I really liked that :D It had a pleasant flow, and calm feel and good humour. I think you could stretch it out a little more, tell the tale with more detail or something, draw the reader in, maybe have the guy nervously glancing around the bar at the end :) Overall though it was a refreshingly different vampire story! Well done :)
I'll see if I can add a tad more...towards the end...there's room for it.
Excellent story and this makes me want to get back to my own vampire story! Also makes me love garlic even more.
Hahahaha! This is an amazing story! I loved how it was told through Sam's voice. He cracked me up. And also the part with the garlic breath that trumped the vampire. Genius!
Very interesting. I live cooking with garlic. and as far as SynOenG is concerned I get the SynO as being Synthetic O, But how do we get Positive out of enG?
Unless I erred...it's SynOneG Synthetic O negative
My mistake. I put Synthetic O positive instead of negative.
Dyslexia strikes again. I probably would have figured it out if I had not been so dyslexic. I switched the n and the e around in my mind and I couldn't wrap my head around the eng. If I had looked at it correctly neg, just jumps off the page.
Sorry Laz for being so dense, well... mehr anzeigen
///:o)
Very nicely done. I usually don't like vampire stories either, but this old tall tale was worth my time for sure....Maybe I have to start eating more garlic, one never knows whom one might meet.....
True tj, we can't be too careful.
And also, if those bloodsuckers don't exist...at the least you will be healthy.
You, got it....
That was cute Laz. I enjoyed the old man, and that scatching of body parts was very funny. That was a good take on an old theme.
Thanks...I thought this story would satisfy all those who are tired of vampire and werewolf stories...lol.
It was a classic change from the new norm...LOL!
Thanks