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gurashlak

Nature ,love & romance all are very well knitted in the poem.Simply the best poem.

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lazarus67

I really appreciate your comment.

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UniquePoet60

I really like your book cover.

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UniquePoet60

Laz, Awaiting Spring is beautiful and touching poetry. Great writing as usual.

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lazarus67

Thanks Pat (Felix) for your kind words.
Also, Bobby who is too shy to write a comment, PMed me saying, "Please keep adding more lines. You might get a Nobel prize for poetry."
That would be a hoot...lol.

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felixthecat

Laz, this edition is perfect. You brought the real beauty of the narrator's voice more fully to bear, lying there as he is in his grave.
As a note: I had to google Flanders, the Great War, the battle(s) of Ypres. I stumbled upon this, and it speaks well of you:)
"...but were unable to break through the Canadian line which held for over two weeks."

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Tala Nightwolf

Love it! its just so beautiful! So fool of wonder! I just love it!!

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lazarus67

Thanks Tala

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Gelöschter User

Even after reading this for the third or fourth time, I still love it. And each time, it gets better. Very well written.

Gelöschter User

Oh, I hear ya. I don't even want to talk about how many times I've restarted writing books. 'Dance of Shame' is one of them.

lazarus67

I had a feeling we were alike.

Gelöschter User

Well then, your feeling would be correct.

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Dalton Edgell

Beautiful

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Primrose Burrell

This is so beautiful...............i love it

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MarisasStories

Absolutely beautiful.

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