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JennaB.56

Another great love poem Laz!

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lazarus67

Thanks Queenjen

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Gelöschter User

So delicate and romantic, sweet and swift to follow the play within. Just lovely.

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lazarus67

Thanks Beatriz

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sereni

I loved it. This gives me a much clearer picture, and a lovely ending to a dreamy poem.

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sereni

Why did you come up with Mary and Me.?

lazarus67

Well...the young girl, soon to be a young woman in the poem is called Mary.

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Gelöschter User

Wow this is amazing. I'm glad you made it longer, it needed that sweet ending.

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UniquePoet60

Laz, Beautiful and touching poetry as usual. I love it. Great writing!

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lazarus67

Thank you ladies. Really appreciate your comments.

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angamonkey

:D loved the ending!!!

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Glynis Rankin

How wonderfully sweet!
I love this Laz and the ending. So glad it was added.

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Gelöschter User

Like it!

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RevkenR

Glad you added more to the poem. I love happy endings.

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paulashene

I wonder Laz, if you ever falter in your writing or graphics. l love all you write and your covers that entice even before the words complete your pictures. This poem has stood up to your benchmark. Absolutely lovely.

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lazarus67

thanks Paula....I just added/completed it.

paulashene

Glad you caught me before I fled these halls. That completion is beautiful with the start of a happy ever after. I need to get on more and grab my favorites and glut out. Wonderful treat.

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