Your imagination was definitely in high gear on that one; I had absolutely not idea where the story was going.

And, as usual, your book cover was absolutely fabulous.

Yes, everyone is correct in saying this can turn into a longer work. Beautiful writing and intriguing plot. You did a great job with this story in such a short time.

Thanks guys...means a lot to me.
And Ken, I know what you mean.
I knew a set of twins, that if the boy grew his hair long like his sister and dressed up like her he would easily been mistaken for his sister.
Oh...and these two in the story were aliens....lol.

It sounds interesting, but... I have to let you know something. My mother was an identical twin. The only thing is, identical twins are always the same sex. If it is a boy and a girl then they are Fraternal twins.

Sorry to burst your bubble, but they must have came from separate eggs. Otherwise they are indeed a strange pare of twins.

I love this story. I'd like to see some of the suspense played out a bit more, but I understand the circumstances. Great concept.

An amazing short story you have here. Even though you only had a day to write it you had done a very good job.

I think this was great, though a bit cheesy at points. But to be able to write something like this in so little time... it's awesome. Really.

Bravo!

I enjoyed the read. It left me with a cozy, happy feeling that somehow makes me feel a bit better about aliens, whether extraterrestrial or from this earth. haha ;)

---RbG

You are a favorite of mine, Laz, and this was a great story, worthy of being expanded upon. I always enjoyed your imaginative and colorful offerings, and this was no disappointment. Great job, my friend.

Your artwork is amazing Laz! And your unique voice in telling a story is awe-inspiring. I, too, would like this to continue.

The thing I enjoy about your writing is you have a voice all your own. Very unique and quite imaginative. Love the cover!