The dead rodent really had me at the end. It really reminded me of my cat lol. This was a great short story.

You had me at dead rodent. Lol! Very clever little twist there. Hitchcock would be proud indeed. You got me going for a moment there. Nice work!

I thought I had the ending figured out...but nope. Well done; a very nice story!

wonderful lively written, I myself felt like THIS one at a time - but the best or rather even more scary: I have THIS ONE at home. :O ;D

Fabulous story again, Laz!

This was a nice little story. I few minor blips, but cleverly done and the ending was unexpected.

I enjoyed this :) I have three cats of my own and they are all proud when they bring home a present! A few small mistakes but otherwise very nicely written Laz :)

I was onto "you" by the middle of the first page:) "It" tipped me off.
When the killer got to the trees, I was dead sure it was a...

VAMPIRE!

Very cool, Laz. Again.

Cute story, Laz. Would be even better if you fixed the typos. IT IS NOT TOO LATE. You can edit all the way up to December. If you want me to point them out, just send an email my way (with a copy of the doc).

Thanks...I aim to please.

I was waiting to see what curve ball you were going to throw the reader in just two pages.

And even knowing the curve ball was coming, it was a swing and a miss on my part as to the ending.