The poor helpless mouse never stood a chance.
Of course it was Fluffy, not Tom, and the prey was not Jerry, or it might have turned out differently.
Good story. I liked the twist at the end.
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The poor helpless mouse never stood a chance.
Of course it was Fluffy, not Tom, and the prey was not Jerry, or it might have turned out differently.
Good story. I liked the twist at the end.
Thanks...oh those tiny illusive errors. Oh well ...can't change them now.
I could guess what the story would be. The smooth flow of the story hooked me to read at a stretch.
For being such a short story this was great, and at first I thought it was about a wolf killing its prey. Yet to find out fluffy was the household's pet cat was priceless! Bravo to another great story Laz, but you might want to check over the story for editing, cause I think you left a word out toward the end.
Thanks Pixie, but we cannot truly trust them altogether either. Looks are deceiving.
and here i thought we were talking about a human killer. :(