I first encountered this character in your "Unfinished Tales" post. Maybe you already know how much I liked the beginning. This character, "Whisper," she's so intriguing! A manipulator in the dark recess of our dreams. There's so much potential there!
Stephen...what you mean to say is...please continue....right?
Great story, Laz. Thanks for sharing. I like the feel of the open ending. If this were a longer story, I might have overlooked the meaning of this part, seeing it only as a vehicle to the next action.
I really enjoyed this one, Laz. Beautiful use of dialogue to carry the story. Definitely on my favorites list. Good job.
"When you think you are awake, is the dream."
Great writing! Thanks Lazarus.
This was a great story Laz, and sometimes when we dream we wish it were real just as you shared with us. I do hope you will write more of this story and focus on what her objective is in helping others!
wow this is an amazing storie it has so much detail i can picture it in my head please write more when you get a chance:)
This story has the makings of an epic fairytale. I was a bit disappointed when it ended, I really would have liked to know what else is in store for Candice and her new-found powers. I agree with several others that you should consider expanding the story a bit after the contest.
Wow, a movie! Can you just imagine that?
Thanks Tonya.