These unfinished tales were very well done.

Bravo!

My favorite was the one about the swings, (Higher). Thought you could elaborate more and give more detail, I thinks it's absolutely hilarious! A piece of art worthy perfecting. I love it.

And you should really finished HOOD and EL LOBO. Ah! That one is beyond words. Of course there are several mistakes(typos) but I couldn't stop reading. Hilarious! It's a story that appeals to the child inside of all of us. It's pure perfection :)

The one about the fairy losing her wings is a good one too.

Anyway...

You are an author held in high esteem here on BookRix as you never fail to provide a perfect read for all ages.

Awesome job!
Keep writing!

---RbG

Thanks Wendy. Yes, you are correct about the cover. I thought the picture of the hammock and palm trees was appropo, mainly because that's where my mind was often....reason for the unfinished tales.

Who'd publish a book with a bunch of unfinished stories? I asked myself.

My frown diminished as I witnessed your presentation, I thought there was something wrong with my screen, but I soon realized you'd made half a book. A poetic gesture that made me feel all gooey. Love that!!

I loved the story about the child on the swing. It was fabulously cute and spooky at the same time. A piece of flash there, Laz. Enter it!

Just rewrite the second sentence...grammar needs a tweak.

Well, thank you for that little bit of joy this fine morning (9.15am here)

BYW...the cover doesn't do it for me...where that poetic gesture?

Great work
Wendy xxxxx

Thanks Robynn...always appreciate your kind words.

Review - What a delightful menagerie of stories and prose. Though I do wish I knew what happened to that poor guy starving in the forest when he found the cabin. Gosh I hate cliff hangers!

My two favorites was the disappearing baby from the swing and the fairy who lost her wings. You have missed your calling, you should be writing fairy tales!

Your writing keeps growing in maturity. Quick little plots, endearing characters that catch a readers attention. You need to finish some of these, but a great collection. Excellent work. Robynn