Thanks Jazz for your input, but once posted it's impossible to change...unless the BR team does it. But it's alright.

you misspelled leech. you put "leach" but it is supposed to be leech.

On page 8, this phrase doesn't make sense:

"Not long after I began fantasizing about having a serious relationship with her, and settling down to a family type of of existence...kids et al. So she left."

1. what does et al mean?

2. Shouldn't you say, "She left" instead of "So she left"?

Other than that, I really liked this story. Great job. Just fix those little errors. They are bugging me. Lol.

Great read.

Sorry Ripples....sometimes things just work out.

Alsam....you could repeat yourself as many times as you wish.
Thanks

You did a great job of painting with words.

As usual. Why repeat myself with telling you how well-written and entertaining it was, etc., etc., etc.?

Instead, I'll just vote for it!

I came back to vote for this beautiful story.

Small? Oh you mean the cover. That's supposed to be Sabrina....she if full figured, like miss Monroe or miss West.
Genevieve is the petite one.
Thanks for the lovely comment Janice.

Seems pretty full to me - at least hour-glass shaped. Good little read for a Jack Daniel break. Hi Jack - What's that line? "Come over and see me sometime?" Reminds me of those days - but I can't recall those so well anymore.

Alll to say Lazarus - good read. snappy- descriptive I am right their on this hot night and I can hear the city noise.

Lazarus,

I enjoyed this very beautiful and descriptive story.

Exceptional writing!