I really enjoyed this one! ;D

I enjoyed this, but unlike most, I was not hoping for a reunion. consequences....LOL

Another huge treasure in a small box. The ending was perfect, the middle evocative and absorbing, the beginning nicely hooked to pull me in. You're a master, sir.

This was BEAUTIFUL. The setting, the descriptions, the characters...everything.
Once again, you have created a master piece.

Laz, you really made me want to root for your character. I'll be voting now!

Laz you tease you... so interesting and bodacious. I enjoyed your descriptions of the places. Even though it was a short story you made me care for the character, I was rooting for them to get back together :D

I liked it! It wasn't at all what I was expecting!

Avery

Well written with great visuals. This could be a play on Broadway New York. The Character I envisioned as Brando in Street Car Named Desire, or perhaps On The Water Front.

The last part with the snail mail make it a modern version 21st century Story, but the emotions and the and struggles still the same.

I can imagine this happening in New York and the main character living on a second floor apartment without air condition in July. I see his window open and a fire escape just outside. The neon lights across the street continuously throwing light that floods his living space.

I saw all that, so it's got to be good.

A beautiful, descriptive tale with a moral. - Lust fades, whilst true love prevails.
Please, send me a pm when voting starts.