Tag, yup, tag. Definitely my favorite. Was Flight suppose to represent suicide or just trying new things? I can see the bird representing the devil.... EITHER WAY, I loved it, and the other two! easy to understand too!
fantastic short-short stories. My favorite, for some reason, was "Tag". Nice work!
I like the way you were very discriptive. I could imagine as if I were there. Great Job!
there was some reason to those. But for one who sometimes write obliquly, I was a bit thrown by Flight, was it already another sitting up high? I am not certain. Like the way it was told though. Evelyn/Bluedragon
I think I like Tag the most--although each was exceptional! The ending was a surprise. Well done, oh great one :)
I've read here. Really impressive stuff, Laz.
Can I tell short and sweet? But these stories sent a shudder down my spine... could not avoid feeling so. With minimum words you have captured those emtoions so well.
These are really good, extremely imaginative. Your mind is certainly in high gear. Excellent 100-word stories.
