Thank you for so eloquently reminding us of how a genuine union of two souls and bodies becoming one can be simply divine.

Thank you...,

Laz, you are truly a poetic man, who makes excellent use of each word he selects from his extensive vocabulary. The verses flowing from your pen, er, fingertips are breathtaking. Ahhh, to enjoy such a love as you have so skillfully presented! That's every lover's dream and ultimate goal in life. You remind me so much of the poets from an era gone by. If only I could be the ink dripping from your pen. Perhaps then I would glean some of your wisdom and insight. Lol! :0)

You can't tell where love, passion and and aching need for someone begins and ends. It's that "Honeymoon" phase you hope never ends. That was beautifully written. The way you made your audience conect with the main character was excellent. It was just beautiful!

It is beautiful!

Dear,dear Laz! As always the master of evoking sensual, thought provoking, pleasurable visuals. As your friend Patrick said, your writing skill has moved up and you are now creating, with great maturity, breathtaking poetry.
Phenomenal job. Robynn

I definately give you two thumbs up on this beautifully written poem. You sure have a very creative and passionate way of expressing romance, in a short but sweet poem. I do have to say Laz, you should be a real poet for romance. Great Job!!!!

(:Thank you for sharing:)

Lazarus,

Wow. I love it from beginning to end. Heartfelt, captivating and awesome.

You have written a piece that will be remembered for all time.

Exceptional writing!

Words come to your pages like songs that sing from the heart.

Now I know who to call on for on all those love scenes that are breaking the lead in my pencils, and singing off key.

How beautiful! I love the way you mixed passion with humility, desire with sweetness, down-to-earth emotion with a poet's way of expressing all of it. Thank you Laz. Simply hypnotic and lovely.