Thanks a lot you guys.
And Sabrina...you are still young...when that day will come...you will always remember it.

to your true love...absolutely a tribute to your entwined hearts and souls...beautiful... p;]

I don't usually read a lot ot poetry, but I gotta admit that this one sucked me right in! Your unique descriptions give this poem serious weight, and made it a very satisfying read. Nice work.

It is beautiful.
The words become a lullaby,
so gentle and, at the same time, strong
The words loosen your harsh grip
They hold you tighter, so you won't fall apart
They whisper you into eternal sleep.
And in my case, they remind me that I've never been in love...

Good job, Laz

I felt this poem..Your words are so gentle and true :) You have done a great job and I think that anyone that has ever been in lover should read this poem..
Great job Laz :)

A sweet serenade for the readers eyes. You are a true romantic poet.

In all honesty, friend or no, I was stunned when I read this, your latest work. It shows me that you have indeed matured and ripened into the master romantic poet.
Your particular voice and imagery evoke deep passion, and yet an innocence capable of making women sigh, and men ask, "Why couldn't I have written like that?"
Truly your best, Laz.

Thanks Serena...coming from you, it is a honor.

You have a poets heart and are a master of these beautifully written words.