The thing about your writing, Laz, and it is way apparent here, is your almost childlike good humor and vast imagination :) I so enjoyed this wacky tale with all my friends.
Good Lord, where will we land next, lol?

9.999 stars--you missed a comma :)

Thanks all you guys and sheilas. And Stacey...I say it's better to be a lousy caddy than a dead corpse (see Stacey's story).

not only do you steal David's designs, but his story lines, too, huh? So, what were you saying about the poor corpse in The Coffee Shop Murder? (Just kidding!)

This was a great little short, and a wonderful way to continue the story yet incorporate a coffee shop. I do feel sorry for Wendy, having to deal with you poor shots, though.

Great job!

Laz very well did and I really enjoyed it. It made me laugh and smile, so my hats off to you.

You clever, funny man! Your ants are kind of like the Greek chorus - I needed a laugh badly, and this did the trick! "D

If Amos and Andy ever make it up my way have them stop by. I know their cousins Dean and Jerry very well...Texas fire ants.

to the original... and, I think, I'm the only one who gets to drink the coffee!

I win!

The sausage though... o that has to go.

A nice yarn, I give it four thumbs up, now c'mon Amos we's gots some bridges to build!

Laz,

Too cute and funny. You have written a very good book based around the story of Amos and Andy. I Love it and could not stop laughing. Just to read and know that some of my bookrix friends are characters in the story is exciting.

You have done it again my friend. Excellent writing! I can't wait to see what you will do next. :)

The further adventures of Amos and Andy gave me a laugh.

To hear so many were there and more on their way, I wouldn't miss it. :) Serena

Since a kid I always wished to go to the Land Down Under...especially to snorkel in the Great Barrier Reef.