Thanks Barry...It was meant to be mysterious , and it seemed to have worked well in this story.

You got me.

You already know the few holes in it that I might mention closing, so I'll just say it's a bit esoteric. Your dedication points to the reason, so I'll also leave that point aside.

It is carefully crafted and cunningly written - with a beautiful relationship at its center. So what else could anyone ask for?

It's a very nice piece of work and perfectly vote-worthy. For a man that claims curling as a hobby... you've swept nothing under the rug that didn't need to be there. (sorry, had to do it)

Excellent as always, Laz! Your spellbinding story has my vote.

I want to escape by the light of the moon, too!

to vote.
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Very fine writing Laz, you get my vote.

Carol x

Sweet. Heart-warming. Voted :)

...but decided to wait until the voting was open to comment. This was so different, so wonderful, and so well-written, I wrote it down on the top of my list of books to vote for. Your ability and style are amazing, and I wish you good luck in the contest - you're one fine writer!

I came back to vote of course. Aww I really loved P.H.E.M. 30.06 did you take that one off?

A great story! You got my vote. Good luck.