Great storyline. I am not acquainted with the story you based this on, but this one is great. My kind of story. Thanks for the good read.

I really do like this one, it's sweet and beautiful. You did well with the 1000 words and I can easily seeing it become more!

Thank you for the entry :)

Lucky97...Sorry I could only put so much into 1000 words. Thank you for your input. And, yes, it should be read twice to get the setting. Makes it less confusing, but I did it that way on purpose...lol.

great book you are an amazing artist

I wondered at first, where is a couple breaking out of? That was the first good twist among a few more. Very good story!

one or two grammar mistakes but still very sweet. I really like the title:) um, just a tiny bit confusing, and could use a little more emotion, but I am very impressed with your vocabulary and description. Keep editing it until it is truly spectacular. It is innovative and original:)

When I'd finished reading, I put my cane on the back of my chair and left...smiling:)

Where can I buy one? I would never look back either. Great book!

of these? As usual, you took me away...p

I voted!